furiosity

[Do228]

Are both versions OK and which one sounds better?

Ian is in a state of furiosity with Notts County for they've repeatedly busted his high-rolling betting slips.
Notts County has incured Ian's wrath for they've repeatedly ruined his high-rolling betting slips.

 

[Tdol]

Rejected?

 

[GoesStation]

Incurr​ed.

 

[Do228]

He had an accumulator betting slip and got already 6 out of 7 games right. He could have won 100,000+ dollars and was already making big plans for his future but then Notts County once again ruined it all - this time by an embarrassing 1-4 home defeat against Newport.

 

[Tdol]

Notts County ruined his bet- I wouldn't talk about the slip.

 

[jutfrank]

Here's a tip: stop betting on Notts County to win.

(No offence to all you Magpies fans reading this.)

 

[Tarheel]

He should bet on the Tar Heels instead. ;-)

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