[General] formal latter need to correction please

[Techolic]

Dear Nancy,


This is to request more information about your Petroleum Engineering course at marietta collage . I am extremely interested in Petroleum Engineeringcourse, and I am anxious eager to apply for it in your renowned collage for admission in 2016.


I have got my a Diploma in Engineering Mechanics cars at from College of Technology Studies of kuwait.


First, I would greatly appreciate some information about the English language requirements for an kuwaiti student.


Second, I would like to inquire about the way how I should present my personal information as part of my application.


Thank you in advance for your attention, and to my request. I look forward to receiving your response.


Yours faithfully

 

[teechar]

Dear Nancy,

This is to request more information about your Petroleum Engineering course at Marietta College. I am extremely interested in [STRIKE]Petroleum Engineering[/STRIKE] that course, and I am [STRIKE]anxious eager[/STRIKE] very keen to apply for [STRIKE]it in your renowned collage for[/STRIKE] admission in 2016.


I have (already) got my Diploma in Automotive Engineering Mechanics [STRIKE]cars at[/STRIKE] from the College of Technology Studies of Kuwait.


First, I would greatly appreciate some information about the English language requirements for [STRIKE]an[/STRIKE] a Kuwaiti student.


Second, I would like to inquire about [STRIKE]the way[/STRIKE] how I should present my personal information as part of my application.


Thank you in advance for your attention, and [STRIKE]to my request.[/STRIKE] I look forward to receiving your response.


Yours faithfully,

XYZ

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