Following September 11, xenophobia, discrimination and racism...

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angelsrolls

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Hello,

Following September 11, xenophobia, discrimination and racism, which have taken on a new dimension with the axis of religion and Islamophobia, as well as extreme right-wing discourse and practices in this direction appear to be spreading across the European countries, especially under the influence of the migrant crisis experienced in the last period. Extreme right-wing actions, essentially, target Muslims and the people from certain countries and regions, not foreigners. Our expatriate citizens make up a significant portion of Muslims especially in the Western European countries and are directly affected by these negative developments.

Can you please check the English above and tell me if there is any flaws?
 
Is this your own text, angelsrolls? If not, who wrote it?
 
Hello,

Following September 11, xenophobia, discrimination and racism, which have taken on a new dimension with the [STRIKE]axis[/STRIKE] aspect of religion and Islamophobia, as well as extreme right-wing discourse and practices in this direction, appear to be spreading across [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] European countries, especially under the influence of the recent migrant crisis. [STRIKE]experienced in the last period.[/STRIKE] Extreme right-wing actions, essentially target Muslims and [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] people from certain countries and regions, not just any foreigners. Our expatriate citizens make up a significant portion of Muslims especially in [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] Western European countries and are directly affected by these negative developments.

Can you please check the English above and tell me if there [STRIKE]is[/STRIKE] are any flaws?
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Is this your own text, angelsrolls? If not, who wrote it?

This is my attempt at translating a text in Turkish into English.
 
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