[General] floric at the beach

[Ashiuhto]

Please check the following paragraph.

I loved my trip to Kenting inTaiwan. I went there with my friends. We swam and played water sports, like kiteboarding, windsurfing and surfing. On the beach, we frolicked, played balls and enjoyed the sunshine. Because Kenting has a lot of funny activities, we love it and want to go there next time.

 

[Barb_D]

Please check the following paragraph.

I loved my trip to Kenting in [space] Taiwan. I went there with my friends. We swam and played water sports, like kiteboarding, windsurfing and surfing. On the beach, we frolicked, played ball[STRIKE]s[/STRIKE] and enjoyed the sunshine. Because Kenting has a lot of fun[STRIKE]ny[/STRIKE] activities, we love it and want to go there again [STRIKE]next time[/STRIKE].

"Frolicked" is a rather old fashioned word.

You can say you want to go there again, you want to return there, you want to go there on your next vacation as well, but to say "you want to go there next time" alone makes it sound like you have not yet been there at all.