first person - is this correct?

[Rover_KE]

Is there no Edit Post at the bottom of your post?

Only moderators can edit thread titles.

I've corrected it.

Rover

 

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first person - is this correct?

The exquisitely designed interiors that will leave guests speechless. It should not just be classy, but every artful detail should be able to daze the onlooker with sheer amazement. A true place of my dreams that surpasses my high expectations, everyday.

I have written the para in first person. Please let me know if above written para is correct

Thanks