keannu
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- Dec 27, 2010
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- South Korea
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Source : self practice
I work as a failure analysis engineer, who is in charge of finding exact failure-causing points. Smart phones are high-tech products, and also our company's engineers are challenging the limitation of technique every day. So failure analysis is a key procedure to making better performance of products.
1.Can you use "who is" to refer to yourself as well?
2. I felt "to making" is better than "to make" in this context. What do you think?
I work as a failure analysis engineer, who is in charge of finding exact failure-causing points. Smart phones are high-tech products, and also our company's engineers are challenging the limitation of technique every day. So failure analysis is a key procedure to making better performance of products.
1.Can you use "who is" to refer to yourself as well?
2. I felt "to making" is better than "to make" in this context. What do you think?
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