eyes wide and (faces) white as ghosts

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diamondcutter

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You could add faces before white but it's not essential. I'd also add 'open' after 'wide'.

(That joke made me laugh out loud. :loling:)
 
Thanks, Rover and GoesStation.

See above.

Hi, GoesStation. Do you mean the original sentence can be reworded as this?

Approaching the car, he notices that there are five old ladies--two in the front seat and three in the back--eyes wide and face white as ghosts.
 
I think the word ‘faces’ [STRIKE]are[/STRIKE] is omitted before the word ‘white’.
See above.

Hi, GoesStation. Do you mean the original sentence can be reworded [STRIKE]as[/STRIKE] like this?

Approaching the car, he notices that there are five old ladies--two in the front seat and three in the back--eyes wide and faces white as ghosts.
No. "See above" means "Look at the text just above this line." I changed "are" to "is" when I quoted your post because the subject of your sentence was "the word ‘faces’", which is singular. You can tell it's singular because it begins "the word"; that phrase can only refer to a single word.
 
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