Establishment/foundation

[Aksinia]

Hello.

A book is dedicated to the X Anniversary of the Establishment/Foundation of the Diocese and Renovation of the Monastery.

What variant will work better in this case? Establishment or foundation?

Can I omit establishment/foundation and renovation?
So it would be just A book is dedicated to the X Anniversary of the Diocese and Monastery.

 

[teechar]

What variant will work better in this case? Establishment or foundation?

I would imagine "establishment", but why have you capitalized some of those words?

Can I omit establishment/foundation and renovation?
So it would be just A book is dedicated to the X Anniversary of the Diocese and Monastery.

No. An anniversary is about an event.

 

[Aksinia]

I would imagine "establishment", but why have you capitalized some of those words?

Because it will be printed on the title page. Shouldn't there be capitalized letters?

One more question. Can I just write to the X Anniversary ... without a book is dedicated?

 

[tedmc]

Because it will be printed on the title page. Shouldn't there be capitalized letters?

One more question. Can I just write to the X Anniversary ... without a book is dedicated?

No, that would be meaningless as a sentence.
You could say, "A book/souvenir programme is (produced) to commemorate/celebrate/mark the X Anniversary...".

As a title of the book, you could write:

Souvenir Programme to Celebrate the Xth Anniversary of the Establishment of...

I think it is better to use a title than a sentence on the cover.

 

[teechar]

Because it will be printed on the title page.

What is going to be printed, a title or a subtitle?

One more question. Can I just write to the X Anniversary ... without a book is dedicated?

Write the full thing out, and we'll comment.

 

[tedmc]

When you say "title page", do you meant the cover?
Is the book the souvenir programme for the anniversary?

 

[Aksinia]

When you say "title page", do you meant the cover?
Is the book the souvenir programme for the anniversary?

Yes, I mean the cover.
It is a booklet (special edition) for the anniversary.

 

[Aksinia]

What is going to be printed, a title or a subtitle? It is going to be a subtitle and it will pe printed on the booklet cover.
I wrote as follows: Booklet to Celebrate the XXX Anniversary of the Establishmentof the Diocese and Renovationof the Monastery.
No a at the beginning of the sentence.
Write the full thing out, and we'll comment.

Would you please check?

 

[GoesStation]

Do you mean the 30th/thirtieth anniversary?

 

[Aksinia]

Do you mean the 30th/thirtieth anniversary?

Yes, I do.

 

[GoesStation]

Do you mean the 30th/thirtieth anniversary?

Yes, I do.

You should use one of those conventions to write it then.