Simononetta
New member
- Joined
- Jul 26, 2018
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Romanian
- Home Country
- Romania
- Current Location
- Romania
Hello teacher, can you please correct my grammar in this essay .
thank you
"Hello all, let me introduce myself. My name is Simona, I'm 36 years old and I live in a very beautiful and green town called Timisoara in the west side of Romania.Recently I bought an apartment in a large house building and I just finished renovate it. In front of my apartment I have a small garden , in wich my dog is playing a lot.
My favourite hobbies are listening to opera music and reading books about scienes and geografy staff. I work as a secretary in a driving school company, from monday untill friday , from 9 am to 5 pm.
After work I usually get out with my friends. To a mouvie or to do some shopping, or just to take a walk in a parc."
thank you
"Hello all, let me introduce myself. My name is Simona, I'm 36 years old and I live in a very beautiful and green town called Timisoara in the west side of Romania.Recently I bought an apartment in a large house building and I just finished renovate it. In front of my apartment I have a small garden , in wich my dog is playing a lot.
My favourite hobbies are listening to opera music and reading books about scienes and geografy staff. I work as a secretary in a driving school company, from monday untill friday , from 9 am to 5 pm.
After work I usually get out with my friends. To a mouvie or to do some shopping, or just to take a walk in a parc."