ENS, which is responsible for digestion, is similar to CNS

[middleage S]

>>ENS, which is responsible for digestion, is similar to CNS and closely influenced by CNS.



I tried my best but I have no idea how to make this sentence 'concise'... please help

 

[Rover_KE]

For a start, it's not a sentence, as it has no main verb.

Please tell us the source and author of the quoted text, and tell us what comes before and after it.

 

[middleage S]

Oh.. sorry... I delete 'Since'. And I wrote sentence by myself

 

[emsr2d2]

I tried my best but I have no idea how to make this sentence 'concise'. Please help.

Oh, sorry. I deleted 'Since'. [STRIKE]And[/STRIKE] I wrote the sentence [STRIKE]by[/STRIKE] myself.

Please note my corrections above. End every sentence with one appropriate punctuation mark. We don't connect sentences with strings of dots as you did. Three dots in a row with a space at each end is an ellipsis and it has specific uses.