email writting for outstanding amount

[helpmesir]

Please correct the following sentence.


Dear Sir,

Kindly view the following mentioned Sr. 1 invoice is pending a petty long time from your end. Kindly consider the payment at your earliest also find the attached scan copy of bill for your reference.

 

[Rover_KE]

Dear Sir,

I am attaching a copy of our invoice no. 12345 dated 21 May 2012 for PKR10,000. Please send your payment at your earliest convenience. Thank you.