during/in the industrial age

[keannu]

[FONT=&#48148]At Deanstone Distillery, I could find the word, “Arkwright spinning machine.” Anciently, it was not a distillery, but a textile mill. I saw the word "Arkwright spinning machine" in a textbook, but it really existed in Scotland during/in the industrial age. [/FONT]


Is the underlined part correct?

 

[Tarheel]

Perhaps:

Originally, it was not a distillery but a textile mill.

 

[emsr2d2]

At Deanstone Distillery, I [STRIKE]could find[/STRIKE] found/saw the words “Arkwright's spinning machine.” [STRIKE]Anciently,[/STRIKE] Long ago, it was not a distillery, but a textile mill. I [STRIKE]saw[/STRIKE] found the words "Arkwright's spinning machine" in a textbook, but it [STRIKE]really[/STRIKE] actually existed in Scotland during/in the industrial age.

Is the underlined part correct?

Note my corrections above. Arkwright's spinning frame/machine was invented in Scotland but that doesn't mean that there couldn't have been one in another country.