[General] Does anyone could correct "Aim" and "Objective" that I wrote for my thesis?

[yaghoob]

Does anyone could correct "Aim" and "Objective" that I wrote for my thesis?

Does anyone could correct "Aim" and "Objective" that I wrote for my thesis?
Topic:Project manager challenges in water conveyance tunnel project.
[FONT=&quot]Aim [/FONT] [FONT=&quot]Aim of the study is to investigate a project manager challenges in water conveyance tunnel project and make effective decision when facing with them.[/FONT] [FONT=&quot]Objective[/FONT] [FONT=&quot]Identify the project manager role in dam and water conveyance tunnel construction project.[/FONT] [FONT=&quot]Project manager importance in facing with challenges.[/FONT] [FONT=&quot]Identify the challenges are in water conveyance tunnel project. [/FONT] [FONT=&quot]Investigate the current successful decision making in facing with those challenges.[/FONT] [FONT=&quot]Improve or make a new method to face with challenges.
I appreciate to any help.
Thank a a lot.
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[probus]

Re: Does anyone could correct "Aim" and "Objective" that I wrote for my thesis?

Aim and objective are synonyms. There is no distinction between them, even in academic writing.

"Does anyone could" is of course totally incorrect.