Diary - I bought a watermelon today.

[Maybo]

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I bought a watermelon today. That was the sweetest watermelon I've ever eaten. I put it in the refrigerator to ice it. I haven't eaten any sweet strawberries nowadays. Even if they look red and big, they are completely tasteless. The ones I had were sweet was when I was a child.

 

[emsr2d2]

This is an entry from my diary. Please check it and correct any mistakes.

I bought a watermelon today. That It was the sweetest watermelon I've ever eaten. I put it in the refrigerator to ice chill/cool it. I haven't eaten any sweet strawberries nowadays for a long time. Even if they look are big and red, and big, they are completely tasteless. The ones I had when I was a child were sweet. was when I was a child.

See above. If you want to use "nowadays", you need the simple present: I don't eat strawberries nowadays.