[Essay] desparetly need advice on my Statement of purpose for MSc degree

[piyal]

Hello everyone. I'm a newbie here, so please pardon me if I've posted it in the wrong place.

I've got poor grades in BSc degree, so I need my statement of purpose to stand out. But I am not convinced that I've done that. I need genuine advice how make my sop more lively. Can anyone help me?

 

[Tarheel]

I recommend that you read some of those SOPs that have already been posted and see if they give you any ideas.