[General] describing an introvert

[otd94]

I am using a single sentence to describe an introvert. This is how it looks.

Introvert: a person who is energized by solitude, lives in their head, thinks before they speak, is often mistaken for being shy, is selectively social, and prefers to have a small group of friends.


I wasn't sure if I needed to fix any of the wording or change the punctuation. Feedback is much appreciated.

 

[teechar]

Hello otd94, and welcome to the forum.
1- "Energized" doesn't seem to sit well with "solitude".
2- I don't see the association between "thinks before they speak" and being an introvert, but then I'm not a psychologist.
3- Is the above homework? Otherwise, why are you writing that sentence?

 

[Rover_KE]

Hello, otd94 and welcome.

Please note that I have changed your thread title.

Extract from the Posting Guidelines:

'Thread titles should include all or part of the word/phrase being discussed.'