When it's really cold up here in Canada the snow sometimes makes a squeaking sound as you walk on it. You can hear it here:
https://youtu.be/5vTQjfPCQog
I walk through the snow, feeling winter's cold embrace.
As I walk through the icy snow, I can hear it crunch beneath my feet.
Right now, some hot cocoa would be a wonderful treat.
When it's really cold up here in Canada, the snow sometimes makes a squeaking sound as you walk on it.
If it's icy snow, walking on it will make a crunchy sound.
When the human wiggles their feet, you can hear the squeak clearly.
What about this?
Jack was fast asleep in his sleeping bag when a noise woke him up. The crunch of someone walking in the snow got louder. He turned around and saw [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] a footprint [STRIKE]on[/STRIKE] in the snow but there was no sign of a person.
Note my changes above. I'd end with "... but there was no one in sight".
Isn't footprint countable?
I found this example in this dictionary:
The child left her tiny footprints in the snow.
https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/footprint#examples
Isn't "footprint" countable?
I found this example in this dictionary:
The child left her tiny footprints in the snow.
https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/footprint#examples
Aha. Does this also work?
Jack was fast asleep in his sleeping bag when a noise woke him up. The crunch of someone walking in the snow got louder. He turned around and saw big footprints [STRIKE]on[/STRIKE] in the snow but there was no one in sight.
I think you are right, though I am not a native speaker or a teacher.
Note my correction above. Please read our corrections carefully. I changed "on" to "in" in my first response. It's disappointing to see you make the same error just a few posts later.
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