yellowpii
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Can you please grade my writing and correct the grammar and vocabulary? Thank you so much!
This writing is my preparation for IELTS speaking part 2:
I’m going to talk about a time when I had to hurry to get ready for an important interview of project named IYM (International Youth Master) which was organized by Global Youth Compass (GYC) this summer. It was Sunday morning right before summer vacation, my interview was set at 10:20 and I was supposed to be there 30 minutes ongoings. The problem was that guard didn’t let me out, he asked for permission or something like this. If you want to go outside, you must prove that you are not on duty, but you know, usual Sunday does not like that. I was stuck for 30 minutes to persuade him that I have a very important appointment but not succeed, luckily my friend helped me to ask the board for my permission. Then I quickly left dormitory and run to the bus stop immediately. I can still remember the moment when the guard called me back and I saw the time: I was filled with a sense of panic and fear as I realized that I was captured. Then, when I left the dormitory and walked towards the bus, I felt thankful to my dear friend and blessed people who didn’t get out yet.
This writing is my preparation for IELTS speaking part 2:
I’m going to talk about a time when I had to hurry to get ready for an important interview of project named IYM (International Youth Master) which was organized by Global Youth Compass (GYC) this summer. It was Sunday morning right before summer vacation, my interview was set at 10:20 and I was supposed to be there 30 minutes ongoings. The problem was that guard didn’t let me out, he asked for permission or something like this. If you want to go outside, you must prove that you are not on duty, but you know, usual Sunday does not like that. I was stuck for 30 minutes to persuade him that I have a very important appointment but not succeed, luckily my friend helped me to ask the board for my permission. Then I quickly left dormitory and run to the bus stop immediately. I can still remember the moment when the guard called me back and I saw the time: I was filled with a sense of panic and fear as I realized that I was captured. Then, when I left the dormitory and walked towards the bus, I felt thankful to my dear friend and blessed people who didn’t get out yet.