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I have chosen a IELTS practice speaking topic and written a paragraph about it. Please check it and correct any mistakes.
Topic: Describe a rule you had to obey when you were in school. You should say:
During secondary school, girls were required to tie their hair if the length of hair grew past their shoulder. I didn't agree with the rule because I didn't see the point of restraining students' hair style in that way. If schools were afraid that students spent too much time on their hairstyle, and therefore didn't focus on study, then they should ask girls to cut their hair extremely short, for example a butch cut. so I didn't know why the rule existed. If we broke the rule, we would receiving a warning. If we committed it twice, we would got a light demerit.
Topic: Describe a rule you had to obey when you were in school. You should say:
- what the rule was
- if you agreed with the rule
- why the rule existed
During secondary school, girls were required to tie their hair if the length of hair grew past their shoulder. I didn't agree with the rule because I didn't see the point of restraining students' hair style in that way. If schools were afraid that students spent too much time on their hairstyle, and therefore didn't focus on study, then they should ask girls to cut their hair extremely short, for example a butch cut. so I didn't know why the rule existed. If we broke the rule, we would receiving a warning. If we committed it twice, we would got a light demerit.