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Hi there. Would you please proofread the following text? Any help would be appreciated.
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Neither Gan, JingYing, nor Lanhua, mentioned it again. Permission to invite her over had now been given, and it was up to Yang. Of course, Yang did ask Qingmei over, eventually. One might call it fate; another, not letting opportunities pass by without a smile. Gan and Lanhua were happy to leave it in Yang’s hands, but Jingying found it a tad difficult. Never the less she did, mostly. Though, Jingying did suddenly start hinting at her plan to cook specific dishes now and then.
When Yang next met Qingmei at the market, she was a little embarrassed by how she had scampered off. “Sorry, Yang. Before I knew what was happening, my feet had taken me halfway home.”
Yang smiled. “You are lucky, my feet turned to lead, and I couldn’t move at all.” Qingmei laughed. "Like a delicate crystal wind chime", thought Yang. “My mother said I should invite you over, and now she hints about it by telling us what she’s planning on cooking.”
Qingmei said, “Maybe I should come over; it might calm her down a bit.”
Yang laughed nervously. “Really, do you think so? Maybe you are right. I find it is often easier just giving my parents what they want, but not yet, not too fast. They need to work for it a little.”
They both laughed smugly.
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Neither Gan, JingYing, nor Lanhua, mentioned it again. Permission to invite her over had now been given, and it was up to Yang. Of course, Yang did ask Qingmei over, eventually. One might call it fate; another, not letting opportunities pass by without a smile. Gan and Lanhua were happy to leave it in Yang’s hands, but Jingying found it a tad difficult. Never the less she did, mostly. Though, Jingying did suddenly start hinting at her plan to cook specific dishes now and then.
When Yang next met Qingmei at the market, she was a little embarrassed by how she had scampered off. “Sorry, Yang. Before I knew what was happening, my feet had taken me halfway home.”
Yang smiled. “You are lucky, my feet turned to lead, and I couldn’t move at all.” Qingmei laughed. "Like a delicate crystal wind chime", thought Yang. “My mother said I should invite you over, and now she hints about it by telling us what she’s planning on cooking.”
Qingmei said, “Maybe I should come over; it might calm her down a bit.”
Yang laughed nervously. “Really, do you think so? Maybe you are right. I find it is often easier just giving my parents what they want, but not yet, not too fast. They need to work for it a little.”
They both laughed smugly.