DrBlueThumb
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Hi, I am applying for a position in which they want someone with creativity. Can you check this for grammar, etiquette, cohesion etc. The position is to be a cake decorator. Thanks, Clint
CREATIVE OBJECTIVE
I feel that because of my 12 years experience in the propagation (grow out and division), of rare, expensive, exotic corals, which are beautifully, flowered like, colorful, half animal/ half plant like creatures that originate under the water in the saline oceans. Qualifies me as being a person with creativity, because you have to cut these specimens and arrange them in a particular fashion to create a colorful piece of art. Just like a bouquet of multi-colored specifically arranged flowers. I would love to use this “unique” ability to find permanent employment where I can utilize my abilities to learn new things.
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CREATIVE OBJECTIVE
I feel that because of my 12 years experience in the propagation (grow out and division), of rare, expensive, exotic corals, which are beautifully, flowered like, colorful, half animal/ half plant like creatures that originate under the water in the saline oceans. Qualifies me as being a person with creativity, because you have to cut these specimens and arrange them in a particular fashion to create a colorful piece of art. Just like a bouquet of multi-colored specifically arranged flowers. I would love to use this “unique” ability to find permanent employment where I can utilize my abilities to learn new things.
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