Could you please check my points for CV?

[autominus]

Hey friends,
I am going to apply to a job. Could you please check it out because I want to make sure that it is grammatically correct.
Thanks in advance.

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Experience:
[name of company]

• Control of quality of manufactured product
• Refurbish and fabricate machinery parts in fine tolerances
• Production of accurate turned parts (single or series parts, machine parts according to drawings)

[name of company]

• Gas line installation, repair and service
• Diagnosing, and repairing leaks in gas line
• Detecting the exact problem area and repairing the line with using special sensory equipment

[name of company]

• Fabrication precision equipment
• Refurbish and fabricate precision forms of plant equipment
• Manufacture metal parts and rubber and plastic components in large precision

 

[autominus]

Would someone please help me with this writing!

 

[teechar]

[name of company]

• Quality control [STRIKE]of quality[/STRIKE] of manufactured products
• Refurbishing and fabricating machinery parts in fine tolerances
• Production of accurate turned parts (single or series) [STRIKE]parts,[/STRIKE] and machine parts according to drawings

[name of company]

• Gas line installation, repair and service
• Detecting, logging and reporting gas line leaks
• Locating leak areas and repairing the line using specialized equipment
  

[name of company]

• Fabrication of precision equipment
• Refurbishing and fabricating precision forms of plant equipment
• Precision manufacturing of metal parts and rubber and plastic components [STRIKE]in large precision

[/STRIKE]

I would advise you to include the dates you worked at the various companies mentioned in your CV.

 

[autominus]

Thank you for your answer.