[General] Could you check for me to make it better?

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My cousin is sitting on the side of the table and I'm on the opposite of her.

Outside the house there are a large of fireworks presenting. Time is passing away in the clock and other members are also doing their own business.

Harmony in this way we are.
 
My cousin is sitting on one side of the table, and I'm [STRIKE]on the[/STRIKE] (sitting) opposite [STRIKE]of[/STRIKE] her.

Outside, [STRIKE]the house there are[/STRIKE] there's a large [STRIKE]of[/STRIKE] fireworks display. [STRIKE]presenting.[/STRIKE] Time is passing away [STRIKE]in the clock[/STRIKE] and other members are also doing their own business.
I don't know what you mean by "members".

Harmony in this way we are.
What does that mean?
 
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family members, like aunt, granny, father etc.
I don't know what you mean by "members".


What does that mean?
That means I like the way people do in family.
 
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Is there a mistake? fireworks are plural noun, why you use "there's" not "there are"?
 
Because it's "a firework display". "Display" is singular. In BrE, "firework" is used in the singular as well (compound noun). I don't know if it's a "fireworks display" in AmE or other variants.
 
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