Could someone correct my essay in about 2-3 hours?

[ErinTheTerribleEssayWritr]

If someone could please read over my essay and make any changes, big or small to them. Tell me if it sounds totally insane and I will change it. It's only grade 11 but my english literally stinks. I will be done in a couple of hours so I'm just giving a heads up. Thanks

 

[Tdol]

We're a language discussion forum and not a free proofreading service. If you post it, someone may look at it- there are no guarantees.