[Essay] Could anyone help me edit my short essay?

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Yossarian23

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I've just completed a one-page essay that is in dire need of editing. The ideas are all in place and the grammar is good, but the wording and flow don't seem right. I'd appreciate it if you could improve it for me. If you don't mind, I prefer sending the essay via email. Thanks very much!
 
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