[Grammar] Could anyone check this letter if correct please

[Daniel66]

My name is X and as the owner of the above property I confirm that Y lived there from 6.12.09 to 12. 01.11..

During the tenancy, he was responsible and punctual in their rent payments, which were paid every month.

Please feel free to contact me if you have any further questions.

 

[tedmc]

Re: Could [STRIKE]anyone[/STRIKE] someone check this letter for me,[STRIKE] if correct[/STRIKE] please.

To Whom It May Concern

Re: Property at xxxx

Dear Sir/Madam

My name is X and as the owner of the above property, I confirm that Y[STRIKE] lived there[/STRIKE] was my tenant from 6.12.09 to 12. 01.11..

(As the property owner of the above property, I confirm that Y was my tenant from ...)

During the tenancy, he was responsible and punctual in [STRIKE]their [/STRIKE] his rent payments[STRIKE] which were paid every month.[/STRIKE].

Yours sincerely,
X

Please feel free to contact me if you have any further questions.

See above. I suppose you know the standard layout of a letter/testimonial.

 

[emsr2d2]

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