keepvogel
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Dear all, quick question regarding a thesis I am currently working on.
Initially, I wrote this:
''For its ideology to remain sustainable, intentional communities are challenged by...''
My supervisor corrected me by saying that I should write it like this:
''In aiming to sustain their ideology, intentional communities are challenged by...''
Question: are both versions correct English? If so, I prefer my sentence construct over hers. What would you people say?
Initially, I wrote this:
''For its ideology to remain sustainable, intentional communities are challenged by...''
My supervisor corrected me by saying that I should write it like this:
''In aiming to sustain their ideology, intentional communities are challenged by...''
Question: are both versions correct English? If so, I prefer my sentence construct over hers. What would you people say?
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