correct this sentence

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correct this sentence - :Joined as a teller and promoted to Internal Auditor within a year.
 
I would use passive: He joined as a teller and was promoted to Internal Auditor within a year.
 
I would say, "Please correct this sentence".
 
It's not a "sentence"--no subject.
 
[h=2][/h] I would say, "Please correct this sentence".



Ouch !!!
 
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