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[abuasim]

I am Sadia
I am born in 1986
I am raised by this honored man(father)
I am married and I have tow children girl and boy
I studied all stages of general education at my village
after that I got married and moved to Ynbou city because my husband was working there .I lived there 4 years and then moved to Jeddah city and enrolled in Saudi Electronic University
My hobbies:
I like writing my diary
I like cooking because the cooking is a wonderful world
I like drawing to express about my feelings
My wishes:
I want to be obedient for my parents
I want to get bachular with high degrees
I want to raise my children in a good way
Thank you for your time and i hope you enjoy my cv
Pleas correct text
and write me back

 

[abuasim]

Please correct for me plz

 

[SoothingDave]

Every sentence needs to end with a period or some other suitable punctuation mark. You can begin there.

 

[abuasim]

Please correct in meaning, order,grammatical issues

 

[emsr2d2]

You correct the punctuation first, then we will look at the rest. Also, please tell us when you will submit your homework to your teacher.

 

[abuasim]

Hurry up to correct punctuation and every thing else u see it if it is a mistake
Many thanks for u

 

[HenryLin]

Every sentence needs to end with a period or some other suitable punctuation mark. You can begin there.

Yes, punctuation mark is the very important factor in writing articles or any sentences. So, try to frame your sentence in a complete manner.

 

[emsr2d2]

Hurry up to correct punctuation and every thing else u see it if it is a mistake
Many thanks for u

Thread closed. We are not here to do your work for you. We certainly do not respond to things like "Hurry up". Come back when you have learnt some manners and when you understand how this forum works.