complaint letter

[Polyester]

Is the following sentence correct and natural?


I wrote a complaint letter to the Apple Inc. about the sales person bad attitude.

 

[teechar]

Not bad, but note:
1- we don't add "the" to company names,
2- "salesperson" is one word,
3- It's not wrong to use "Inc", but it's not necessary, especially when you're talking about a famous company like Apple.

Post the amended version below, and we'll help you further.

 

[Yankee]

Not bad, but note:
1- we don't add "the" to company names,
2- "salesperson" is one word,
3- It's not wrong to use "Inc", but it's not necessary, especially when you're talking about a famous company like Apple.

Post the amended version below, and we'll help you further.

...and "salesperson's".

 

[Polyester]

I wrote a complaint letter to Apple about the salesperson's bad attitude.

Is it natural now?

 

[teechar]

Very good. :up:

Note that if this is the first mention of "salesperson", then consider:

I wrote a complaint letter to Apple about the bad attitude of one of their salespeople.