compassionate leave letter

[poongodi]

Please correct my letter.

Sir,
My father has been reported with heart blockage at xxx hospital. Doctor's were advised him to undertake heart surgery on Xxx. As an elder Son my family need my support on the surgery date. So if u sanctioned two days leave on xxxx date it would be grateful.

 

[teechar]

Please correct my letter.

Dear Sir,
My father has been [STRIKE]reported[/STRIKE] admitted into ABC Hospital with heart blockage. [STRIKE]at xxx hospital.[/STRIKE] The doctors [STRIKE]were[/STRIKE] have advised him to have [STRIKE]undertake[/STRIKE] heart surgery on Xxx [What does that mean?]. As [STRIKE]an elder S[/STRIKE] the oldest son in my family, I am needed and must be present at the hospital [STRIKE]my support[/STRIKE] on the day of the surgery. [STRIKE]date.[/STRIKE] [STRIKE]So if u sanctioned[/STRIKE] I, therefore, ask you to grant me two days' leave on 23 and 24 March. [STRIKE]xxxx date it[/STRIKE] I would be most grateful.

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[poongodi]

Xxx stands for date

 

[teechar]

Leave it out.

 

[teechar]

Note that I have also changed the title of your thread. "Plz" is not a word in English.