Thank you for your contribution.
@teechar. I am really sorry for taking up your time.
The first thing I'd like you to learn here is the correct punctuation around "however". You should use a full stop before it and a comma after it. If you do that with the above, then "rising" is obviously wrong. I suspect you meant "arose". If so, then you can say "arose with a few subscribers".
I am puzzled between using "
present participle", "past participle" and using the former with conjunction when connecting two sentences.
That is right we "however" can be used in the middle of the sentence like ,however, or a full stop and a comma after it. To be clear, I don't know should I use the present participle or past participle.in IELTS exam, I am required to write variety of sentence structures. Writing simple structures will make me stuck in Band 6 in writing. These examples sentences are different than the pie charts I had posted.
1.The percentage of people who immigrated to the UK was 30%, two years later, the same percentage fluctuateed,
rising from 45% to 58 between 2009 and 2012. I don't know if rose is correct.
2.The number of Mexican students who applied to American university was 12336 in 2002,
climbed, to 23234 three years later. I don't know if climbing is correct.
With conjunction, should I use the present participle or past participle?
3. In 1999, the consumption of pizza in France was significantly higher than soft drinks at 25%, but
dropping to 13% the following year. I don't know if I should say ",but it dropped to".
Thank you again. I really appreciate your contribution.