Check my fragment of cover letter?

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dkqmail

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Polish
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Poland
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Hi,
Could you please check and correct my writing?
Does my text sound natural? If not, how can I fix it?

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If you can use a self-starter with unlimited initiative, excellent computer science skills, and a talent for solving stubborn problems, please call or write me at the address or phone number on my resume and I will cheerfully make myself available to you for a personal meeting at your convenience. I can provide outstanding personal and professional references.
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Thank you in advance for your help.
 
If you can use a self-starter with unlimited initiative, excellent computer science skills, and a talent for solving stubborn problems, please [STRIKE]call or write me at the address or phone number[/STRIKE] contact me using the contact details in my resume, and I will [STRIKE]cheerfully[/STRIKE] duly make myself available [STRIKE]to you[/STRIKE] for a personal meeting at your convenience. I can provide outstanding personal and professional references.
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