charges incurred

[MAJSH]

1. All charges incurred so far in the work mentioned above, have already been handed over to your finance department.
2 .All charges paid so far in the work mentioned above, have already been handed over to your finance department.

3. All charges incurred by UPS so far for the above order, have already been forwarded to your Finance Department.
4 .All the charges paid so far on the shipment for the above order, have already been forwarded to your Finance Department.
5. All charges paid to UPS so far for the above order, have already been forwarded to your Finance Department.

Please check the setences above and advise if they are worded correctly and natural.

Thank you.

 

[Yankee]

1. All charges incurred so far in the work mentioned above, have already been handed over to your finance department. OK.
2 .All charges paid so far in the work mentioned above, have already been handed over to your finance department. OK.

3. All charges incurred by UPS so far for the above order, have already been forwarded to your Finance Department. Need context/explanation. Why would "charges incurred" (acquired) by an organization/business (UPS) be forwarded to a Finance Department.? Is "incurred" necessary?

4 .All the charges paid so far on the shipment for the above order, have already been forwarded to your Finance Department. OK.

5. All charges paid to UPS so far for the above order, have already been forwarded to your Finance Department. OK.

Please check the sentences above and advise if they are worded correctly and natural.

Thank you.

Y.

 

[emsr2d2]

1. All charges incurred so far in for the work mentioned above no comma here have already been handed over to your finance department.
2. All charges paid so far in for the work mentioned above no comma here have already been handed over to your finance department.
3. All charges incurred by UPS so far for the above order no comma here have already been forwarded to your finance department.
4. All the charges paid so far on for the shipment for of the above order no comma here have already been forwarded to your finance department.
5. All charges paid to UPS so far for the above order no comma here have already been forwarded to your finance department.

Please check the sentences above and advise if they are natural and worded correctly. and natural.

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Note my changes to all five sentences. You used "finance department" in #1 and #2 but "Finance Department" in #3, #4 and #5. Why did you change your mind about the capitalisation?

To be honest, I'm not sure what any of them means. I think you're trying to say "We have sent the invoice(s) for the work mentioned above to your finance department". Is that right?