[General] Changes to the job role

[Economist2010]

Hi All,

I had an interview recently and have been asked to confirm if I will accept a role in sales. I sent my confirmation and I received the below e-mail.

"We might have some changes regarding the role will update you once we conclude"

I would like to follow up. What is your suggestion?

My suggestions:

1-I hope that the changes to the role has finished and you concluded what the role will be

2-I am looking forward to having an update if the changes to the role has already done and it has been concluded what would be the role

 

[Tarheel]

Neither of those is grammatically correct. In any case, they said they will update you, so you don't have to say much. Perhaps:

Thank you for your email. I will be looking forward to hearing from you.

Or something like that.

 

[Economist2010]

Neither of those is grammatically correct. In any case, they said they will update you, so you don't have to say much. Perhaps:

Thank you for your email. I will be looking forward to hearing from you.

Or something like that.

Thanks Tarheel for your suggestion. However, I will appreciate it if you could edit my above two suggestions just for my learning

 

[Tarheel]

For the first one, perhaps:

I will eagerly waiting for you to tell me what the changes to my role will be.

It's not pushy, and it says you're looking forward to hearing from them.

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For the second one, perhaps:

I am looking forward to an update, and I hope to hear from you soon.

 

[Charlie Bernstein]

Hi All,

I had an interview recently and have been asked to confirm that I will accept a role in sales. I sent my confirmation, and I received the below e-mail.

"We might have some changes regarding the role and will update you once we conclude."

I would like to follow up. What is your suggestion?

My suggestions:

1- Thank you. I look forward to hearing about the changes.

2- Thank you. I hope you can let me know what the changes are soon. I look forward to hearing from you.

Those are appropriate replies.

 

[Tarheel]

As soon as what?

 

[emsr2d2]

Thank you. I hope you can let me know what the changes are as soon. I look forward to hearing from you.

Charlie has either added a word accidentally, or omitted two words after "soon".

 

[Charlie Bernstein]

As soon as what?

Don't know where that as came from! Thanks. I just kicked it out.

(First you kicked my as, then I kicked my own as. . . .)