cardiovascular diseases

[majid72]

Hello

I'm wondering if the below (incomplete) sentences are OK ?

- Given the downward trend in the age of cardiovascular disease victims....
- In view of the reduction in the cardiovascular diseases affliction age....
- Considering the earlier development of cardiovascular diseases........
- Considering the development of cardiovascular diseases at younger ages....

Many thanks

 

[Rover_KE]

They are all incorrect because incomplete sentences should end with an ellipsis (three dots).

It's always difficult to comment on the correctness of sentence fragments without knowing how they end.

I have changed your thread title.

'Thread titles should include all or part of the word/phrase being discussed.'

 

[GoesStation]

When presented at the ends of sentences or as the whole of an incomplete sentence, fragments of sentences should end in four dots: three for the ellipsis indicating missing content, and one to end the otherwise incomplete sentence.

 

[Tarheel]

Two things.

Space after a question mark and not before.

I would not use the second one.

 

[Raymott]

Your partial sentences 1 and 4 make sense to me. I don't think the others work.
There's no such thing as a "cardiovascular diseases affliction age".
"... the earlier development of cardiovascular diseases" is ambiguous without more information.