meela
Member
- Joined
- Aug 7, 2010
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Urdu
- Home Country
- Pakistan
- Current Location
- Pakistan
Please correct the following paragraph if it is not.
My younger brother wanted to buy a new car; he deposited car cost with the car manufacture and went abroad for 2 weeks. He instructed me to get car on my behalf. Now I have got his car and want to inform him. Can I write this way?
Dear brother,
I have received your new car along with all tools. Can I park it in your old garage or somewhere else? I am awaiting for kind advice.
My younger brother wanted to buy a new car; he deposited car cost with the car manufacture and went abroad for 2 weeks. He instructed me to get car on my behalf. Now I have got his car and want to inform him. Can I write this way?
Dear brother,
I have received your new car along with all tools. Can I park it in your old garage or somewhere else? I am awaiting for kind advice.