[General] Can you spot grammar errors and correct them.

[Ferds]

Can you spot grammar errors and correct them.

I have been working in computer networking for almost three years now. And I'm glad that I ended up being in this field because I have long figured out that this is what I have always I wanted to be.

I always try to continue to improve my knowledge and skills in networking and in other things. Having said that, I'm a current CCNP and I'm going to continue to study and acquire other popular certifications because I know that this helps me perform my job better and stand out from others.

Thank you!

 

[Ferds]

Can someone please tell me if this paragraph is error-free or there are grammar errors in it.

 

[tedmc]

I have been working in computer networking for almost three years now. And I'm glad that I ended up [STRIKE]being [/STRIKE]in this field because [STRIKE]I have long figured out that[/STRIKE] [STRIKE]this[/STRIKE] it is what I have always wanted to be in.

I always try [STRIKE]to continue[/STRIKE] to improve my knowledge and skills in networking and in other things. [STRIKE]Having said that,[/STRIKE] I'm a [STRIKE]current[/STRIKE] CCNP and I'm going to continue to study and acquire other popular certifications because I know that this helps me perform my job better and stand out from others.

It is not so much grammar error but the clarity and logic of your expressions that need to be looked into. Do you acquire the certifications only because they are popular or they are relevant to your field?
Formal writing should not use abbreviations like "I'm".

not a teacher

 

[Ferds]

I acquire certifications because they are both popular and relevant to my field.