Lloyd Christmas
Member
- Joined
- Feb 5, 2016
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- French
- Home Country
- France
- Current Location
- France
Dear all,
I have been rewriting my résumé in English and I'd really like to get it corrected by a native speaker. Could you please help me?
I did not know how to translate my function name for my first and third experience. The exact translation is "management controller" but I feel like this is not really used, so I chose "Financial controller" (or "financial analyst ?).
Anyway, feel free to make any comment, even "professional" comments.
Thank you!
Work experience
IT and Back Office perimeters financial controller
· Analyzed and tracked costs of IT and Back Office perimeters (monthly reports)
· Controlled expenses and internal invoicing process
· Analyzed and corrected discrepancies between different accounting systems
· Analyzed and calculated monthly variations for IT perimeter accruals
· Coordinated actual and forecast processes in collaboration with IT budget department
Business analyst
Internship
· Analyzed and tracked global sales (daily, weekly and monthly reports)
· Prepared new semester offer (took part in models choice for store clusters, made presentations)
· Allocated models to commercial areas (Europe, Asia, US, ….) on a weekly basis
· Supported sales team: sent and received models, performed occasional studies
Capital Markets financial controller
Internship
· Made monthly reports and set up annual budget for two product lines of FIM (fixed incomes market)
· Analyzed monthly direct costs for all product lines of FIM
· Maintained and improved direct costs forecast tools for all product lines of FIM
Sport shoes salesman
part-time job (Saturday, Sunday)
· Attended and sold to local and foreign customers (in English, Spanish)
· Managed sales areas and items layout
General Employee
Supermarket (cash desk, cleaning sales area, stock management), part-time job (20 hours a week)
Assistant order management
Internship
· Received and input orders from customers and solved orders-related problems
· Set up and provided a daily report about orders’ state (late delivery, blockage, …)
Education
2014 Master in corporate finance in xxx Business School
2012 - 2013: exchange student in xxx University
2009 Preparatory school for the entrance exam for French Business Schools in xxx, France
Education
Languages
French Mother tongue
English fluent (TOEIC: 908/1000; TOEFL: 96/120)
Spanish fluent
IT skills Mastering of Microsoft office (Word, Power Point, Excel, Outlook), SAP, Essbase, CCMX, Python
Extra curricular-activities
Treasurer, xxx
The xxx Business school book and tie-in store (annual revenue: €14k)
Football Practiced during 10 years to a French regional level
I have been rewriting my résumé in English and I'd really like to get it corrected by a native speaker. Could you please help me?
I did not know how to translate my function name for my first and third experience. The exact translation is "management controller" but I feel like this is not really used, so I chose "Financial controller" (or "financial analyst ?).
Anyway, feel free to make any comment, even "professional" comments.
Thank you!
Work experience
IT and Back Office perimeters financial controller
· Analyzed and tracked costs of IT and Back Office perimeters (monthly reports)
· Controlled expenses and internal invoicing process
· Analyzed and corrected discrepancies between different accounting systems
· Analyzed and calculated monthly variations for IT perimeter accruals
· Coordinated actual and forecast processes in collaboration with IT budget department
Business analyst
Internship
· Analyzed and tracked global sales (daily, weekly and monthly reports)
· Prepared new semester offer (took part in models choice for store clusters, made presentations)
· Allocated models to commercial areas (Europe, Asia, US, ….) on a weekly basis
· Supported sales team: sent and received models, performed occasional studies
Capital Markets financial controller
Internship
· Made monthly reports and set up annual budget for two product lines of FIM (fixed incomes market)
· Analyzed monthly direct costs for all product lines of FIM
· Maintained and improved direct costs forecast tools for all product lines of FIM
Sport shoes salesman
part-time job (Saturday, Sunday)
· Attended and sold to local and foreign customers (in English, Spanish)
· Managed sales areas and items layout
General Employee
Supermarket (cash desk, cleaning sales area, stock management), part-time job (20 hours a week)
Assistant order management
Internship
· Received and input orders from customers and solved orders-related problems
· Set up and provided a daily report about orders’ state (late delivery, blockage, …)
Education
2014 Master in corporate finance in xxx Business School
2012 - 2013: exchange student in xxx University
2009 Preparatory school for the entrance exam for French Business Schools in xxx, France
Education
Languages
French Mother tongue
English fluent (TOEIC: 908/1000; TOEFL: 96/120)
Spanish fluent
IT skills Mastering of Microsoft office (Word, Power Point, Excel, Outlook), SAP, Essbase, CCMX, Python
Extra curricular-activities
Treasurer, xxx
The xxx Business school book and tie-in store (annual revenue: €14k)
Football Practiced during 10 years to a French regional level
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