Can you check my grammar in sentences, please?

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duy065

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SATURDAY WET NIGHT
Now, at about 10:15 p.m. on Saturday night. This night is so wet, cold and tired. Right now, I start writing my diary. I feel very strange and embarrassing. I'm wondering when will I make my dreams come true. I've a lot of dreams, but now I'm thinking about how to make friendship with John - one boy in my class - to be closer. I don't deny that I like him. He's handsome, with a special hair, which front is curly and back is straight. He has got a sharp angular face, with the sexy eyes.
 
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no one answer my question. It's hard to understand
 
Now, it's about 10:15 p.m. on Saturday night. This night is so wet, cold and tired. Right now, I start writing my diary. I feel very strange and embarrassed. I'm wondering when will I make my dreams come true. I've a lot of dreams, but now I'm thinking about how to make a friendship with John - one boy in my class - to get closer. I don't deny that I like him. He's handsome, with a special hair, which front is curly and back is straight. He has got a sharp angular face, with the sexy eyes.​


 
SATURDAY WET NIGHT
Now,[STRIKE] at [/STRIKE] it's about 10:15 p.m. on Saturday night. [STRIKE]This [/STRIKE] The night is so wet, cold and tired (??). Right now, I[STRIKE] start[/STRIKE] have started writing my diary. I feel very strange and embarrassed[STRIKE]ing[/STRIKE]. I'm wondering when will I make my dreams come true. I've got a lot of dreams, but now I'm thinking about how to make friends[STRIKE]ship[/STRIKE] with John - one boy in my class -[STRIKE] to [/STRIKE] and be closer. I don't deny that I like him. He's handsome, with [STRIKE]a[/STRIKE] special hair, [STRIKE]which[/STRIKE] the front is curly and the back is straight. He has got a sharp angular face, with [STRIKE]the [/STRIKE]sexy eyes.

I don't understand your use of "embarassed" or "tired" in the context written. Also, please be patient for responses to your posts. It is not necessary or polite to ask a second time for a response.
 
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