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Can this be said:
I think it's got potential, but would first like to see phase one of the hostel, that's due for completion next month, before I make a decision on pooling funds in or not.
Is the segment in bold okay? Should I use parenthesis instead?
I think it's got potential, but would first like to see phase one of the hostel, that's due for completion next month, before I make a decision on pooling funds in or not.
Is the segment in bold okay? Should I use parenthesis instead?