[General] Can someone please check my sentence?

[RosaMacherie]

Can someone please check my sentence?

"Points will be assigned based on the numbers of appearances the items listed in the sub-groups appeared in the website."

I want to say that point will be assigned each time an item in the checklist appeared in the website. For example: if email are listed in website 4 times then 4 points will be assigned.

Thanks!

 

[RosaMacherie]

Hi is the sentence in " " grammatically correct?

 

[billmcd]

Can someone please check my sentence?

"Points will be assigned based on the number[STRIKE]s[/STRIKE] [STRIKE]of appearances [/STRIKE][STRIKE]the [/STRIKE] of times items listed in the sub-groups appear[STRIKE]ed[/STRIKE] in the website."

I want to say that point will be assigned each time an item in the checklist appeared in the website. For example: if email are listed in website 4 times then 4 points will be assigned.

Thanks!

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