[Grammar] Can any one re-format this email

[bartachiali]

My most recent role was at Hauptbahnhof Refugee Centre(Train of hope) as a volunteer Architect, Preparing temporary shelters working with infrastructure team working closely with community groups has allowed me to develop a broad range of skills from brief gathering through coordination and liaising with other parties including the transportation, social media and medical treatment and legal advice.

 

[emsr2d2]

When you say "re-format", do you mean you want us to rewrite it for you?

 

[bartachiali]

I suppose you can always welcome to add or improve the main structural from what has been written. I am afraid this is what I can achieve. However . of course any comments or changing the original format would be highly appreciatable.

 

[emsr2d2]

My most recent role was at Hauptbahnhof Refugee Centre (space before an opening bracket) (Train of Hope) as a volunteer architect. Preparing temporary shelters, working with the infrastructure team, and working closely with community groups has allowed me to develop a broad range of skills from brief-gathering [strike]through[/strike] to coordination, and liaising [strike]with other parties including the[/strike] on transportation, social media, [strike]and[/strike] medical treatment and legal advice.

See above.

 

[bartachiali]

This is what I call it re-format, I can't find those little mistakes, but you can recognize with the blink of eyes and that is the different and I will eventually I will be able to improve my writing
Thank you

 

[bartachiali]

Can you say to coordination and why?

 

[emsr2d2]

It uses the "from-to" construction. Your broad range of skills ranges from XXX to YYY.

 

[GoesStation]

This is what I call it re-format, I can't find those little mistakes, but you can recognize with the blink of eyes and that is the different and I will eventually I will be able to improve my writing
Thank you

The verb for that activity is to proofread.