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I'm trying to write a script:
He rewinds the footage to the moment where the lights turn on, but from the angles of the four cameras it's not clear what triggered the motion sensors.
Is the bold-faced part correct? Is it awkward or OK?
He rewinds the footage to the moment where the lights turn on, but from the angles of the four cameras it's not clear what triggered the motion sensors.
Is the bold-faced part correct? Is it awkward or OK?