but from the angles of the cameras

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I'm trying to write a script:

He rewinds the footage to the moment where the lights turn on, but from the angles of the four cameras it's not clear what triggered the motion sensors.

Is the bold-faced part correct? Is it awkward or OK?
 
I don't think you need to mention angles at all. I'd say something like "... but none of the four cameras picked up anything that might have triggered the motion sensors".
 
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