be haunted

[Do228]

Which version should I use?

1 Ian, you're an evil wrongdoer. May your body and soul forever be haunted by torment.
2 Ian, you're an evil wrongdoer. May forever torment infest your body and soul.
3 Ian, you're an evil wrongdoer. Torment shall forever plague your body and soul.

 

[Tdol]

1 works. 3 is not wrong, but it is expressing a fact rather than your wish.

 

[jutfrank]

You could say May your body and soul be forever tormented.