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I'm writing a script:
Ted sits against a tree, still trying to catch his breath, when he hears the sound of twig snapping. He freezes. Then cautiously peeks back around the tree and sees a flashlight come on. About 40 yards away.
Can I write 'peeks back around the tree' here? Would you?
Ted sits against a tree, still trying to catch his breath, when he hears the sound of twig snapping. He freezes. Then cautiously peeks back around the tree and sees a flashlight come on. About 40 yards away.
Can I write 'peeks back around the tree' here? Would you?