[Grammar] au pair letter

[Gonplei]

Good morning,

I need your help to write a standard letter that I will send to some american colleges.
I am going to work as an au pair and stay in the United States for one year.
To complete the program I should attend a six credits course. I can decide which one, the only thing that matters is that it must be a six credits one.

Dear Sirs or Madams,

I'm sending you this email because I need some information about your courses.
I'm coming to _____ to work as an au pair, I will be there from September 1st.
I'm expected to attend a six credit course and I would like to know which courses you can offer to an international student.

Looking forward to hearing from you.
Thank you in advice.

(Name)


Thank you for your help!

Have a nice day.

 

[teechar]

Good morning,

And a good morning to you too, Gonplei, and welcome to the forum.

I need your help to write a standard letter that I will send to some American colleges.
I am going to work as an au pair and stay in the United States for one year.
To complete the program, I should attend a six-credit course. I can decide which one, but the only thing that matters is that it must be a six-credit one.

Dear Sir or Madam,

I'm sending you this email because I need some information about your courses.
I'm coming to _____ to work as an au pair. I will be there from September 1st.
I'm expected to attend a six-credit course, and I would like to know which such courses you can offer to an international student. Please provide me with as much relevant information (fees, class schedules, starting dates, etc.) about suitable courses as you can.

[STRIKE]Looking forward to hearing from you.[/STRIKE]

Thank you in advance. [STRIKE]advice.[/STRIKE]

Yours faithfully,

(Name)


Thank you for your help!

Have a nice day.