Gaya87
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- Jul 5, 2015
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- Interested in Language
- Native Language
- Tamil
- Home Country
- India
- Current Location
- Malaysia
I need some advise on below write up. I've summarize the short synopsis using the long synopsis. Is my short synopsis too generic? Or I should be elaborated more? Any suggestion? Thank you.
Short Synopsis
Asyikin stuns when Awie is falling from the rooftop of her house. They look at each other and love starts to bloom.
Long Synopsis
Asyikin is a typical village girl, the daughter of a strict village chief. Meanwhile, Che Awang and Awie are two troublesome village boys who like to cause commotion in the village as well as bother the village`s young ladies. One day, Awie tries to sneak into the village chief`s house to steal some cash, but ends up falling from the rooftop, right in front of Asyikin. Thus begin their love story.
Short Synopsis
Asyikin stuns when Awie is falling from the rooftop of her house. They look at each other and love starts to bloom.
Long Synopsis
Asyikin is a typical village girl, the daughter of a strict village chief. Meanwhile, Che Awang and Awie are two troublesome village boys who like to cause commotion in the village as well as bother the village`s young ladies. One day, Awie tries to sneak into the village chief`s house to steal some cash, but ends up falling from the rooftop, right in front of Asyikin. Thus begin their love story.