Bassim
VIP Member
- Joined
- Mar 1, 2008
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Bosnian
- Home Country
- Bosnia Herzegovina
- Current Location
- Sweden
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As Paul walked down the high street, he saw swarms of people hunting bargains. I thought occurred to him that if he were married he would now be dragged from one shop to another and would splash out on the new curtains, tablecloths, crockery and cutlery, bedclothes, lamps, pictures, and dozens of others items they did not need, but which his wife would absolutely have or would declare a war. Paul felt pity for his fellow men who were lugging bags filled with all kinds of articles with a dejected expression on their faces. They had been demoted to porters for this occasion, and if they refused, they would be risking domestic peace or probably their marriage too.
As Paul walked down the high street, he saw swarms of people hunting bargains. I thought occurred to him that if he were married he would now be dragged from one shop to another and would splash out on the new curtains, tablecloths, crockery and cutlery, bedclothes, lamps, pictures, and dozens of others items they did not need, but which his wife would absolutely have or would declare a war. Paul felt pity for his fellow men who were lugging bags filled with all kinds of articles with a dejected expression on their faces. They had been demoted to porters for this occasion, and if they refused, they would be risking domestic peace or probably their marriage too.