Gaya87
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Hi, can someone please check the following sentences? Thank you.
Did I use suitable words for the second line? ..Soon after,..
Long summary
John, a brilliant and charismatic criminal profiler known for his uncanny insights, is called to inspect a pair of bodies found buried in concrete. Soon after, he finds his profiling abilities have disappeared. He takes a leave of absence from the police, and begins therapy sessions with psychiatrist Dr Sasy.
Short summary
John, a gifted criminal profiler known for his uncanny insights, is called to inspect a pair of bodies found buried in concrete, but unfortunately his profiling abilities have disappeared.
Did I use suitable words for the second line? ..Soon after,..
Long summary
John, a brilliant and charismatic criminal profiler known for his uncanny insights, is called to inspect a pair of bodies found buried in concrete. Soon after, he finds his profiling abilities have disappeared. He takes a leave of absence from the police, and begins therapy sessions with psychiatrist Dr Sasy.
Short summary
John, a gifted criminal profiler known for his uncanny insights, is called to inspect a pair of bodies found buried in concrete, but unfortunately his profiling abilities have disappeared.